consider me gone lyrics youtubeI'm a songwriter. How to get my lyrics noticed (on youtube)?

I'm a songwriter (or at least i myself consider me one). and i've been writing songs since I was 10 years old. 2 of my best songs I call "You're So" and "Ditch Him Date Me". I wanna get my songs noticed on Youtube, but haven't gotten hits yet. Any tips?

And here are my songs:

1) This one has no title yet:

You asked me who you should date
I wanted it to be me
We could’ve went to a rink to skate
But now I know I’ll be
A fighter, so i can learn moves, fight him
And win your heart,

I’m single again, not optimistic
Also I’m depressed and surrealistic
Over you rejecting me
Even though you’re dating him
I was too blind to see, but
Why did you pick him over your best friend?

You told me you and him were a couple
And you rejected me over facebook
I just wanted me and him to have a scuffle
And I would then read a good cookbook
I then took my duffel and went home
And you didn’t care how I felt about yconsider me gone lyrics youtubeou two together

I’m single and not optimistic
Over you rejecting me
Also I’m artistic, surrealistic
Even though you’re dating him
I was too blind to see, but
Why did you pick him over your best friend?

Now I wanna make you regret picking him
And i wanna sing my revenge to you
Make him feel emotionally slim
Then I’m sure you’ll know I’m true
And come back to me

2) (This song has no title yet either, just 5 verses)

Why did you and those other girls reject me
Yall had boyfriends but didn’t even tell me, but now I see
That I have to just let love come to me
Not have myself digging for years at a time

I can’t do it anymore
I know I’m in high school, but still
No girls are as good as I thought you would be
But you have a beau too, and you lied selfishly
And you took my heart, my feelings, and crushed them in two

I just wanna give you and the other 5 girls
A piece of my mind about why I should be treated like pearls (they’re preciconsider me gone lyrics youtubeous)
It’s wrong to crush a good dude like me
Take my spirit, my pride
And now I decide
If I should date anymore high school girls, instead of women

I’m best friends with one of you girls
You called me sexy
You said that’s cute when I had feelings for you
But you turn around and play me with someone else

To me rejecting me was a huge punch in the face
Because it shows why you and the 5 girls are all a disgrace
When I really love someone I tell them how I feel, but now
I can’t trust any women anymore, or at least until college

What do you think? Are they great? Do they suck?

If they do how can I improve them? Btw hit me up on youtube i'm dsim200000
My ex and I are back together again and this is going to be permenant. We found some very good help online that is unbiased not like our friends and relatives were. We sought and got relaionship advise, it helped us and I sure it can help you as well. Good Luck